The haiku of the lost sunglasses

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[this is good]
I'm really sorry
I made sugar cookies once
Lost them the same way
[this is good]
You deserve something for using the tag "nimrod". A cookie, maybe.
Shit! Clamhead wrote a haiku comment in return. I can't compete with that.
Take out one syllable, and you could... Mine is simply not haiku-shaped.

(Honestly, however, I didn't notice that until after I posted it. Then I got to tell myself how unwittingly brilliant I was.)
Oh wow, compassrose. I didn't even notice, lol. I was too busy being disappointed at my lack of brilliance... damn... *wanders off muttering about lost opportunities*
The last time I attempted a haiku...your dad's class. I could never do them and it frustrated the bejesus out of me. I never could make the word count, syllable count whatever it was workout and still express a complete thought

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